a story about my vagina/period
Dec. 21st, 2004 12:37 amhi there... i have a story for you all.
i've been kinda shy about posting this, but i have convinced myself people might like to read it, so i have posted something i wrote online, a nonfiction piece i did for a course in college. it's about my mother, sort of, about about me, and about why i'm in medical school now to become a gynecologist. if you're bored, and on vacation from school, like i am, maybe you'd like to take a look. it's not really long. it was about 6 pages double spaced in Word, i think.
here's the link
crossposted to vaginapagina
i've been kinda shy about posting this, but i have convinced myself people might like to read it, so i have posted something i wrote online, a nonfiction piece i did for a course in college. it's about my mother, sort of, about about me, and about why i'm in medical school now to become a gynecologist. if you're bored, and on vacation from school, like i am, maybe you'd like to take a look. it's not really long. it was about 6 pages double spaced in Word, i think.
here's the link
crossposted to vaginapagina
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Date: 2004-12-20 10:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-12-21 01:49 pm (UTC)there was never any "congratulations, you're a woman!" either.
The Flip Side of the Coin
Date: 2004-12-22 12:55 pm (UTC)I would hope that i am going to be able to find a good balance between the method used by my mother and the one used by yours to gently usher my daughter (if I have one) into the rites of womanhood.
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Date: 2004-12-22 08:48 pm (UTC)BTW Being a soon to be English teacher, I tend to read and edit along the way. You tend to over-use commas where full stops and semi-colons can be used. It you want help editing, I would be happy to oblige! I loved your story and thought that it had really good flow. I liked the abrupt change from intro to your first period. It reflected the abruptness of the situation and lent well to the story. I really enjoyed it. I look forward to other writings from yourself and others!